“…When I got her critique, I didn’t know whether to laugh or cry. It was full of so many red marks that I felt like I was back in school and I failed a test! But, as I read her comments and after we spoke, I decid­ed to use every­thing she gave me to rewrite the story. And, I have to say for the first time, I felt like I final­ly “got it”. That feeling of something missing was no longer there. I sent Eileen the improved version of the story and received a second critique that is helping me to tight­en it up and get it ready for submis­sion…” (read full testi­mo­ni­al)

—From Aida C. Henix, Picture Book Author

Submit Your Revised Manuscript

This option is for writers whose work I have recent­ly reviewed in the past six months. I will gladly look at your manuscript a second time if you feel you have made substan­tial revisions.

Please feel free to query me through the submis­sion form and I will give you a quick call to discuss.

Thanks for your interest in F1rst Pages.
Acceptance of new submissions is currently on hiatus while we attend to our backlog of existing submissions.

Please refer to Kid (& YA) Book Revisions until further notice.